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>>鲁迅《螃蟹》译文赏析
《螃蟹》是近年发现的鲁迅散文。文章发表于19198月间,时值五四运动方兴未艾,作者通过语言故事来提醒人们新生事物往往有被旧事物消灭于萌芽状态的危险。

               《螃 蟹》   

                         ----鲁迅

    老螃蟹觉得不安了,觉得全身太硬了,自己知道要蜕壳了。

    他跑来跑去的寻。他想寻一个窟穴,躲了身子,将石子堵了穴口,隐隐的蜕壳。他知道外面蜕壳是危险的。身子还软,要被别的螃蟹吃去的。这并非空害怕,他实在亲眼见过。

    他慌慌张张的走。

    旁边的螃蟹问他说:“老兄,你何以这般慌?”

    他说:“我要脱壳了。”

   “就在这里蜕不很好么?我还要帮你呢。”

   “那太怕人了。”

   “你不怕窟穴里的别的东西,却怕我们同种么?”

   “我不是怕同种。”

   “那还怕什么呢?”

   “就怕你要吃掉我。”

【张培基译】

   An old crab grew restless. Finding himself stiff all over, he knew it was time for him to moult his shell.

   He dashed here and there in search of a cave to hide. He was going to block up the mouth of the cave so that he could moult in secret. He knew it would be very dangerous to shed his shell in the open because, with his new shell still being soft, he might be eaten up by other crabs. This fear was not groundless for he himself had really seen it happen to other moulting crabs.

   The old crab kept moving about in a hurry.

   A nearby crab asked, “Hey, brother, what’s the rush?”

  “I am going to moult,” answered the old crab.

  “Wouldn’t it be all tight to moult tight here? I could help you out with it.” 

  “How horrible that would be!”

  “ You mean while you’re not scared of other things in the cave you are sacred of your own kind?”

  “No, I’m not scared of my own king.”“Then what are you scared of?”

  “Noting but being eaten up by you.”

【注释】

“觉得全身太硬了”译为Finding himself stiff all over,其中all over 意即“全身”或“浑身”,作状语短语用。如逐字译为Finding his whole body stiff 并无不可,但是语言稍欠地道。

“脱壳”译为to moult his shell,其中to moult为专用语,意同to case off.

“外面脱壳”中的“外面”意即“在露天”,故译为 (to moult)in the open, 以代替to moult outside the cave.

“身子还软”意即“脱去旧壳后新壳还软”,故译为with his new shell still being soft. 如按字面直译为with his body still being soft 则欠确切,因“身子”在此指“新壳”,不泛指“躯体”。

“旁边的螃蟹”译为a nearby crab, 比a crab beside him 灵活。

“就怕你吃掉我”译为Nothing but being eaten up by you, 乃I’m scared of nothing but being eaten up by you 之略。

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