如何写好作文：

1. 分段布局（总-分-总，经常3段）2. 连接词（笔记有） 3. 亮点（短语、从句）4.书写（写得好可以加至少2分）

Start out small

However, a great number of students do not behave themselves. They do something terrible/bad. For example, some students throw their school uniforms and even rubbish here and there. Other students chase each other in the school, which is very dangerous. (描述校园内的不良行为，如校服到处乱扔，有的同学乱扔垃圾。有的同学追赶打闹。)

Moreover, some students are so mean/terrible that they make fun of others, for example, giving their classmates awful nicknames. Some students even say bad things about teachers, which is extremely rude and impolite. （自由发挥，描述其他一至亮点校园内不良行为）

It’s (high) time for us to take some actions to protect our school and make it better. First of all,  we should stop throwing our things everywhere. I believe it’s our duty to make our school clean and tidy. Secondly, we should be friendly to our teachers and classmates so that we can lead a happy school life. (lead a ....life过....的生活）Last but not least, we should tell others not to break school rules.（改进措施）

Our school is home to us, so why not start out small and try our our best to make it safer and more beautiful? （发起校园文明倡议。）