| 你校英语节将举办“My
Photo, My Story”征文活动。请你挑选一张自己的照片,根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。
·What were you doing in the photo? (描述原照片场景/活动内容)
·Why would you like to share it? 重点在于“我的故事”。先讲自己如何克服困难、获得成长,再升华到文化层面(剪纸的吉祥寓意、文化传承),逻辑上是从“具体经历”到“抽象意义”,层层递进,结尾更有力。
> 第一段:总起,写一个?句:有一张?的照片
> 第二段:简单描述照片所反映出的?:
> 第三段:原因:?+?):
(1)失败与坚持 + 成功的喜悦;
(2)剪纸非遗+福字寓意
> 第四段:照片对我的意义:个人成长+文化传承
My
Photo, My Story
Photos
record记录 beautiful memories美好回忆
in our lives. One photo I cherish珍惜 was taken last winter during a school
paper-cutting activity.
In
the photo, I was sitting at a wooden
table, holding拿着 a piece of red paper一张红纸 in one hand and a pair of scissors一把剪刀 in the other. My head was lowered低着,
eyes focused on专注于 cutting the Chinese character 汉字“福” (fortune).
Around me lay散落着 tiny细小的 paper scraps纸屑 and a
finished “福” pattern一个剪好的“福字”图案.
I was so concentrated专注的 that I didn’t notice没有注意到
my classmate taking the picture.
I want
to share this photo for two reasons.
First, it captures捕捉了 the joy快乐 of overcoming difficulties 克服困难through persistence通过坚持.
Cutting out 剪出the character “福”
was not easy. I failed several times, but my teacher encouraged me to keep trying. After much patience耐心 and practice练习, I finally succeeded. Second, it reflects反映出 the beauty of traditional Chinese art forms中国传统艺术. Paper-cutting
is an
intangible cultural heritage非遗, and the
character “福”
stands for代表 happiness and good luck.
In
a busy modern life, a traditional art form传统艺术
like this brings us a sense of peace宁静感
and connection to our heritage与传统遗产的联结.
That is why this
photo is not just a personal memory, but also a
reminder of提醒 the cultural
treasure文化瑰宝 we should cherish应该珍惜.
我的照片,我的故事
照片记录了我们生活中的美好回忆。一张我珍藏的照片是去年冬天在一次学校剪纸活动时拍的。
照片中,我坐在一张木桌旁,一手拿着红纸,一手拿着剪刀。我低着头,眼睛专注地剪着汉字“福”。周围散落着细小的纸屑和一个已经剪好的“福”字图案。我太专注了,以至于没有注意到同学在拍照。
我想分享这张照片,有两个原因。第一,它捕捉到了通过坚持克服困难的快乐。剪出“福”字并不容易。我失败了好几次,但老师鼓励我继续尝试。经过多次耐心练习,我终于成功了。第二,它反映了中国传统艺术之美。剪纸是非物质文化遗产,“福”字代表着幸福和好运。
在忙碌的现代生活中,像剪纸这样的传统艺术带给我们一种宁静感以及与传统的联结。这就是为什么这张照片不仅是一个人的回忆,更是一个提醒——提醒我们要珍惜这份文化瑰宝。 |